by RockStarGod
You should be sent to dungeon for that cliffhanger!
Titles aren't all you're taking liberties with. Doing a little research would improve the story.
Just one example (there are others): blackjack doesn't pay 10-to-1.
I was worried when there was a gap between chapters, nice to know you were just taking a holiday break. Anyway you do not need to have 3 sex scenes in every chapter, just let the story dictate what happens. Some of the scenes feel forced in my opinion. I had to roll my eyes at the billionaire getting 3 twenty-ones in a row in Vegas, but having him donate it to the homeless shelters is a nice touch. Finally, you lost a star for that ending, LOL. Hopefully it's just temporary, I'm going to be disappointed if Luke and Sophia do not marry.
The ending to this chapter has to be one of the cruelest cliffhangers ever!