by RockStarGod
The ending to this chapter has to be one of the cruelest cliffhangers ever!
I was worried when there was a gap between chapters, nice to know you were just taking a holiday break. Anyway you do not need to have 3 sex scenes in every chapter, just let the story dictate what happens. Some of the scenes feel forced in my opinion. I had to roll my eyes at the billionaire getting 3 twenty-ones in a row in Vegas, but having him donate it to the homeless shelters is a nice touch. Finally, you lost a star for that ending, LOL. Hopefully it's just temporary, I'm going to be disappointed if Luke and Sophia do not marry.
Titles aren't all you're taking liberties with. Doing a little research would improve the story.
Just one example (there are others): blackjack doesn't pay 10-to-1.
You should be sent to dungeon for that cliffhanger!