by fuzzyb2
Thank you so much for your well-founded advice. Since you were not satisfied (couldn't cum?) perhaps you could write some of your own so we can all see those qualities you so deserve in a story.
Makes me think you're your the exspurt... oh, and you needn't shout. We can 'hear' you without the ALL CAPS.
Next time, stop reading and find someone else to judge -- perhaps yourself.
why wasn't it enough to have Paul and Suzanne connect?
Before they can even have a moment of private consummation another couple is added to the mix, one of whom is very domineering, controlling, and manipulative. There is no romantic moment of exploration and discovery. No tenderness. No blissful rapture at the end of all the tension and anticipation. Instead, one random woman from the dance floor celebrates turning 50 by directing them to a very mediocre coupling after which auntie tries out a passed out and unaware BBC to see if the forbidden reality lives up to the hype.
opportunity missed
moment gone
leading up to
"We never spoke again."
btw; if you are going to delete all but one comment, why leave one that references others that have been removed?
A wonderful literary interlude., very well written, imaginative, hot and stimulating.
Thank you.
Great story. Don’t know what’s wrong with some of the other posters, racism or religious morality overdose, who cares? Just a very horny, nicely written story. Thank you. 😉