All Comments on 'An Aunt's Lust Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Waaaaaay too slow

I get not rushing straight into the sex scenes, but to publish a story where NOTHING happens is a bit much - should have added a second page. The writing is nice though so keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just Commit to Writing a Story

Just commit for God sakes. Too short and not enough happening. Now I have no interest in reading more. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Go AWAY

"Forget about it." PINK SLIP

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