All Comments on 'An Awakening Ch. 03'

the hubby want some too.

You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.

Any man who is a willing cuckold is dispicable. Marcus is sick.

The first chapter was great, almost perfect story of incestuous love, to a story of almost attempted rape, to domination. The description of the fucking in this story was almost an afterthought, less time spent on that than on the description of Marcus. I'll read the next chapter just because I have the time invested in the story, but I have little expectation for it.

It was getting exciting when suddenly the husband popped in. While watching his wife having sex maybe a fetish for the husband, it does not make for attractive reading. You fail to clarify whether the husband is gay or bisexual.

I hope ch 4 is better.

While not overly fond of cuckold stories, this one was deftly woven and nicely told.

You write very well and I hope that we will see a lot more of your work.

In a Mother/Son/Sister story, to bring in another male is never a good idea however.

That bitch was mis-named as anything angelic she aint.

Your first two were enjoyable.

This one aint.

I really appreciate the eloquence of the language in which this is written. It has a style that can only be from the British Isles.

Having Marcus as an outside observer to the sexual depravity added depth to the scene, as well as depth and background to Angelique's character.

While I prefer Marcus to remain on the periphery of this particular tale, I'd love to read more about his life and times, told in a separate story.

Absolutely amazing story and writing