All Comments on 'An Awkward First Date'

It was an awkward read. Misused words, poor sentence structure and punctuation. I read the entire story and came away with conflicting impressions of the two main characters. The ending was disappointing. There was romance somewhere? Or was it simply the fact he was well hung?

A good beta read and tight editing would help, but the ending was so dismal it didn't add to the story and would benefit from a rewrite.

So good I hope u add more chapters of this love story !!!!

felt too fast with bad ending. He is a bit creepy pushing for more and falling in love so fast. Nice try... still a decent story.

Harry is a real gentleman in coming to Joelle's rescue -- in more ways than one. And when they finally connect and see each other in the shower, they make the best of it. Please write chapter two, and give sexy Harry some chest hair for that sexy man bod, and a nice cock bush for his eight inches! Loved the story, and love how they are getting along! More please!

I enjoyed the read. You did gave some word problems, but it didn't take away from the story. I hope in chapter 2 that they have more romance included in their relationship. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Great story but like many stories on literotica it ends too rushed and too soon. It is too bad that you are not going to post anymore on literotica. I hope I can find a continuation of this story on Amazon.