All Comments on 'An Easy Mistake To Make'

Nice one. Needs a sequel.

Nice story, but I think it would have been good to build up to them having sex - first they masturbate together without telling each other, then they actually masturbate together, and finally they have sex, that sort of thing. But nice story, hope the feedback is useful.

Great premise.

But every sexual activity hapens abruptly. Continues too fast. Ends with all sorts of details undescribed.

The fucking was much too abrupt. Needed to have preliminaries. For example: if they're both masturbating, why couldn't she ask if they could watch each other before cock goes into pussy. Then, during jointly observer masturbating, dialog about each was imgining while masturbating. And certiainly soething with her breasts.

Three stars.

A bit rushed. Definitely could have stood more of a build up. Pretty hot though.

a little too quick, but no hesitation on the creampie

What is there is fine. But the ending was just sort of abrupt. Seems unfinished, theres more to say.

Good treatment of a worn-out story line - gets a (charitable) 3

Enjoyable but not enough meat to the story. A missed opportunity to build their characters and relationship through conversations. Then it might have been believable.