All Comments on 'An Elf in Heat'

Super hot and well done. I like that everyone was civilized about it and there was no crudity or name-calling, just sexiness.

This was so well written! I too like how civilized they were, asking for consent and caring for Jiana's pleasure too! Jianna had this funny side to her and I really liked Kuon too! I also liked how Kuon commented on Jianas sweetness, showing that sometimes orcs can appreciate that.

I LOVED IT! I really liked the mxmxf part and I'd like to see a series of the elf the two female orcs and the two males as well it sounds like a cool Polly relationship and I'd love to see it if your down to make it! And maybe make a twist where Kuno can breed with Jiana or something that would be really cool and I'd love to see a relationship with her too! That's just a story idea that I thought about but I love this smut it's amazing! Keep up the good work