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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Story in search of an editor

I read stories by checking the ending and then going to the beginning if they appear worthwhile. Doing that here, I found so many jarring grammatical errors that I didn't bother going back to the beginning. The author must proofread this several times or get an editor. Please.

B5040905B5040905about 12 years agoAuthor
Care to do the editing?

I have tried to contact editors on the site and get no response. Please send me a message if you would like to edit my story.

Decal_lastDecal_lastabout 4 years ago
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Good little tale but really needs proofreading

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I have found an editor. Thank you Todger65. The third Jamie story has been sent for review.

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