All Comments on 'An Encounter with Saria'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yes

Yes more PLEASE! !!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellent!

You are a very talented writer!

Please, keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More!

I really enjoyed this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
To continue

Enjoyed your story very much. Lots of ways you can go. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Yes more please especially if you make elements of the story a real swasjbuckling adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
really good`

really good story. loved the characters and the scenery. i really hope you decide to write another chapter. thanks for sharing

Geromino91Geromino91about 4 years ago
An Adventure with Saria...

Sounds like a good possible title to me. Lots of ways the stories could continue. I’m not sure what your world that these characters looks like but I can imagine. It sounds like Saria doesn’t get out much because of her work. An idea that came to me is what if they went on a trip together to a hot springs in a not so far away land from Elyen Alora, the first encounter around a campfire on the way and the second at the springs. Just a though. A fleeting fantasy.

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