by EdwardKiles
Enjoyed your story very much. Lots of ways you can go. Please continue!
Yes more please especially if you make elements of the story a real swasjbuckling adventure.
really good story. loved the characters and the scenery. i really hope you decide to write another chapter. thanks for sharing
Sounds like a good possible title to me. Lots of ways the stories could continue. I’m not sure what your world that these characters looks like but I can imagine. It sounds like Saria doesn’t get out much because of her work. An idea that came to me is what if they went on a trip together to a hot springs in a not so far away land from Elyen Alora, the first encounter around a campfire on the way and the second at the springs. Just a though. A fleeting fantasy.