All Comments on 'An End to Virginity'

Nice read with lots of sex, well written. :-)

look,,you hate them,,dont put it in your submission...you a demon lover???

If you don't like the story. Fine. If you think it inappropriate to cite to Ezekiel 23:20. Fine. But there is no "hate" here. At least on my part. Its an erotic story site. And sometimes it's interesting to try something new - - like quoting the Bible. And yes, I pulled that version of EZ 23:20 off a respected bible-study website. You may not like how I used it. But I thought the context was amusing. You didn't. Fine. But I don't hate you or anyone. And if I did love demons, there is a category on LIT just for that.

I love reading sexy stories. I have always had an appreciation for women who really love sex. The scene of her taking his virginity is a complete turn on. Keep up the good work this was a super sexy story.

Great story line and well developed, Need to have more from you.

I just wish the girls were as sexually aggressive when I was in College.

One comment, I don't think any man, including myself, would feel very comfortable with his penis pointing down his leg when even semi-sweet. It likes the normal position, when erect, flat on the tummy.

You took the literal meaning of that verse, but sex it not actually was what that verse is about.

…great story. And quite funny. Good premise of making it the protagonist's goal to de-virgin engineers.

And the Ezekiel thing was the funniest part. The Christians who criticize you are on par with the men who perpetrated the Charlie Hebdo acts & the Taliban. Both have absolutely zero sense of humor.

"Even with the condom on, I could feel the warm liquid as it left his body."

Just why should his spunk feel hotter than the inside of your body? Nonsense, keep it real.

And a nice little twist with that bible ref. Keep it up.... altho I did think the threesome at the end was brushed over rather too quickly....

WOW! What a story! I LOVED it! My first time was also kind of not planed. Not quite this fun, but still VERY enjoyable. And for those bible thumpers complaining- what the hell are you doing on a site like this?!

I want to say, I really enjoyed the dialogue. I personally would have liked a bit more in the sex descriptors, perhaps facial expression and detail. All in all, well written and a pleasure to read. Please continue.

Hot story, especially the embarrassing pants jizzing in class! I actually liked it more before Tim went to the shop: more tension, more suspense.