All Comments on 'An Englishman's Word'

by Vashtar

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marndeemarndeeabout 10 years ago

I LOVE THIS STORY!

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 10 years ago

Instead of telling what she said, you could write the dialogs. It would make the text more fluent and compact.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story!

Hope chapter 2 is coming soon!

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 10 years ago
OH I LIKE THIS!!!!

One HOT story...you set the stage and then went with so well...waiting for more!!!!

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