All Comments on 'An Englishman's Word'

by Vashtar

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arrowglassarrowglassabout 10 years ago
OH I LIKE THIS!!!!

One HOT story...you set the stage and then went with so well...waiting for more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story!

Hope chapter 2 is coming soon!

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 10 years ago

Instead of telling what she said, you could write the dialogs. It would make the text more fluent and compact.

marndeemarndeeabout 10 years ago

I LOVE THIS STORY!

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