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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey9 months ago

5 stars. I would love to read about their life together.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great start

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Well it was ok but to much was left out and it should have been written better.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great start! Keep going.

LookOldButFeelYoungLookOldButFeelYoung9 months ago

Pathetic. Why the fuck would he slap her. 2**

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A lot sure happened in a single page.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I know a great writer when I read one. I just read one.

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juanviejojuanviejo4 months ago

QUATRO ESTRELLAS!

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...