All Comments on 'An Erotic Fairy Tale, Part 2'

I like the story and the characters, and I appreciate the shorter length of these parts in general but...

1. Both 1 & 2 have stopped when things are heating up or heating up again. Yeah, keep 'em wanting more, but I felt frustration rather than anticipation when this part ended.

2. The girl Tink/Wendy seems too good to be true. I know, it's a fairy tale, but still...

3. Where is the fantasy/magic? Yeah, she says she used fairy magic, but is that real or a joke?