All Comments on 'An Erotic Tale Ch. 04'

I'm loving this series. Very sexy. Please keep writing

*bangs head on the wall* WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CANNOT leave it like that!!! Helloooooooooo!!!! Meanie!!!!!! *cries* I HATE cliffhangers!!! Ughhhhh!! If you're going to leave it like that, I suggest you write faster!!! Sheeshhhh!!

LOL. Anyway, so good! I'm loving it! I hope Carson doesn't get hurt too much, seriously, Ron is just a psychotic stalker...he gives me the creeps too!! I mean, popping up everywhere and ordering same ice cream? If that doesn't give anyone the creeps, I don't know what would.

Cheers!! :)

P. S. Write faster!! :)

What a cliffhanger..... will Mike recue Carson... or will Carson be lost forever from Mike!

Don't keep hanging too long.....PLEASE :)

I enjoyed this chapter and the way you made room for developing their relationship as well as peppering in Ron and moving the stalker storyline forward. You've really done a great job of showing them build a good foundation of their relationship. I like how Mike is showing he's vulnerable to Carson too. I am still waiting for the 'I love you's'. Of course the cliffhanger is cruel! Wow, Is it Ron who is attacking him? I'd have thought he'd have known it was him but he does get knocked pretty hard. I really hope he isn't hurt too bad and that he is smart enough to report this. Please continue it soon.

Beautiful storyline so far, though I'm not appreciating the cliffhanger so much at the moment ;p. Love the characters, love how sweet they are together =D Can't wait to read what happens next...please don't keep us waiting too long ;p

LOL, great chapter!! Can't make up my mind if it's Ron or not :)

Just started this series tonight and think it's a great read then you do this to me' Dissspicable!

Please keep these guys coming fast. (oh dear that didn't come out right or did it) :-p

This is one of the best series I've read on Lit in a long time and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

This whole story has been really well written and heartfelt.

Is chapter 5 coming soon? Anxiously waiting...want to know what happens to Carson!!!!!