All Comments on 'An Evening at the Bar Ch. 01'

by SummerElizabeth8

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billyastabillyastaalmost 18 years ago
can be

your explanation of your slaves feelings and expectations were real and exciting

libertarianlibertarianabout 17 years ago
Good story

I can't wait for the next chapter

jackflxjackflxabout 17 years ago
A wonderful story thank you

Loved the story, an interesting fantasy, well written.

hazeleys34hazeleys34over 10 years ago
great story

This story was great. I can't wait to read more.

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