All Comments on 'An Evening Out Ch. 01'

Really loved the way you developed the storyline. Very erotic, with great anticipation and characters. Can't wait to read the remaining chapters of this story to see what else happens!

Nicely flowed and descriptive. Had a nice touch to it from the perspective of the narrator. Smiles

The characters are very likeable and I love how this is starting out. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

You write very well and very effectively. Great story too!

I am pleased to have discovered your work. I am adding you to my favorites list as this is the third story I have read tonight and your clear, descriptive writing is consistent. Plus we seem to have at least one fantasy in common. Whilst I am on that topic, the early chapters had me wondering if I should submit my picture (smile) as you recounted your 'audition' process.

Btw, do any of your stories involve black women?

Glad you've found my stories. You're welcome to audition any time!

As for race: in many cases, characters could be of any race you want to imagine.