All Comments on 'An Evening with Danielle Ch. 01'

very sweet and hot.

Thanks for your wonderful comments. I love getting feedback! I've been working on the next part of this story. It seems to take awhile for it to get approved but I will submit it when I'm done. Hope you bookmarked me :)

Can't wait to see the next installment!

Really enjoyed the buildup and sex scenes well written.

The story was well written. It has all the parts of a great story. Start, high point, CLIMAX, and ending. I look forward to the next installment

Realistic and *very* hot. Looking forward to more.

was well written. You need to polish up your grammatical structure. For example, some of your sentences are not real sentences. There are lines of speech melded into the next paragraph when should stand separately. This needs a good editor. However, having stated this, some of the sex is damn good!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

"WOW"@ Thoroughly hot chase and climax! Literally!

Very Erotic!

Excellent! No, extraordinary! Extremely well written, descriptions of the love-making are flaming hot.