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Mr_B_9030Mr_B_9030about 3 years ago
5 Stars

I like the flow of your stories.

I'm with the rest of the readers about the abrupt ending of the first one, but I'll admit I'm not much better with some of my own hooks and you picked it up nicely in part 2.

Characters are coming along great don't be afraid to expand on them in future chapters.

I'm excited to see what the future holds for you and the girls, so I'm favoriting author.

You rock keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Once again, words fail me. I’m glad they don’t fail you. More, please. It might be fun to add Mom…

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Waiting for part 3

Waiting for part 3

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I like to write, but the only thing I write at all well is sex. I'm not saying I'm particularly good at that, just better than other things I write. I'd love to hear your fantasies and chat with you. I like strong women who know how to seduce a man. My fantasies and role p...

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