All Comments on 'An Eventful Drive to the Cabin'

Pretty good story, Allie now needs to have Garys cock in her hot pussy all the time.

Good story. Keep writing!

Great story, and hopefully just a start tomorrow to come. I loved how the pee got them both aroused. Hopefully there will be more of that too. On glitch I noticed was he started as a two-R Garry, but was a 1-R Gary for the rest of the story. Still have you 5-stars though.

We really need a part two

This is a completely overwhelming short story...detailed, and leaves the reader wanting MORE!!

SO...WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER...PLEASE!!

I have never stopped and closed out a story in under a minute before. So, congrats?

"At nineteen, it wasn't so surprising that Allie still wasn't serious about anyone, but some people thought that Gary, at twenty, maybe should be starting to think about finding someone and settling down."

Seriously? There are people...real people...on the planet we live on, who have a problem with a 20 year old not having found the person they will settle down with?

That tells me a lot about the author's mindset. I can't go on.

Pretty good for a first day on here. A follow up would be great.

Believable. And exciting.

Great story! I hope you can take this and them to the next level. Please include some more waterworks.

A great beginning of a hot series I hope.

Will we have more adventures?

Please add more,

Mother Nature is a beautiful sex partner.

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER...PLEASE I can't wait to read when they have sex for the time

I always wished that I would have had a sister that I could have had some fun with!!!!

Fantastic story. It really needs to be continued. The added element of peeing added a lot to the eroticism.

Absolutely loved it. I hope there will be more to this story