All Comments on 'An Eventful Weekend'

by ChosenUndead

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Confusing

First paragraph she's his wife, then his girlfriend then his wife.....

He is in his pool in his backyard and the stranger in his robe asks him if he came here alone?????

Sorry, got no further than that

ChosenUndeadChosenUndeadalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Not sure what you mean

I accidently published the wrong version hence, the glaring inconsistency.

The story will be updated shortly with no mention of a wife.

I don't understand your second point.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Gross

Quit reading as soon as I saw it was a fag story. There is a section for this.

ChosenUndeadChosenUndeadalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Actually...

The section you're talking about is gay male and not fag. While this story is about a bi-curious male's first time which is why it's in the first time section.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Loved the passion between men

The idiot who said your story was gross, does not know what he is talking about. There is nothing gay, or fagott about two men enjoying sex. No labels please!

Csucker64Csucker64about 5 years ago
Good

Yes I’d love to read more about Seth and Brent

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