All Comments on 'An Excursion into Adultery Pt. 02'

Be a man and go 50-50 and get the divorce and don't get married again... I'm sure Sarah can find better than you... even if she goes down to skid row.

Sounds like something swingerjoe would write. Maybe this is another of his aliases. It's bad enough to be him.

Cheaters!!! As usual they blame the spouses for their cheating...If he didn't love his wife anymore, why didn't he talk to her and get a divorce? Then he could fuck anyone he wanted...1*

WHY WAS BONNIE TAYLOR BANNED?

For the read.

The first installment wasn't bad. This one unfortunately is. Please read Scouries stories to learn how to put actual zest into cheating. If you are going to do the crime , then there should be quality time somewhere in the mix. The tryst in this story has all the passion and suspense of ordering at 2am drive through at Taco Bell.

She's a cheating slut with no love or respect for him. She doesn't care about pregnancy or disease and she has no problem exposing him, demeaning and humiliating him so why would he do anything but dump her? Implausible, lousy story.

Please don't listen to the assholes that so far have commented on your stories. You can really write. You have a gift for descriptive wording that pulls a reader along. A very sexy story. I felt I was on the bed next to them. It's just a story, entertainment, fun to think about, a fantasy that makes us hard the next time we try to fuck a boring partner. It happens. Whatever works. Thanks for 2-terrific reads. Please keep writing. I can't wait for more from your fertile mind. 5+

Definitely, this author has potential. The story doesn't have much depth but for a first timer it's fine. The writing craft is good and I bet it would only get better with time. Too bad he quit; no submissions since '16. Do you suppose all the wankers and sourpusses drove him away?

As to above comment, after this story, I certainly hope so.