All Comments on 'An Exhilarating Christmas'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

If this is your first time, I can only imagine what the next will be. What a great start. I do hope to see more of his adventures or any other storyline you start. My only, and I mean only, suggestion is draw out the seduction more. Don't have them just gagging for it from the beginning. 5 well deserved stars. Please be encouraged to write more.

Dewey Cheatham

ud1234ud1234over 1 year ago

Well done, well paced.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic story! I hope to see more from you. Very well written

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 1 year ago

Needs more please, he could at least have fucked Casey

koinonia_92koinonia_92over 1 year ago

Exceptional! A follow up is necessary.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Boy that was pathetic and delusional, turn the computer off and get a reality check

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 1 year ago

That was awesome and I can't wait to read more.

Iceman79Iceman79over 1 year ago

Very good for your first story! Keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please make sure you follow where each character is: Casey and Andrew went to the gym together, but Lia was sitting there waiting for Andrew and walked back to the house with him. It should have been Casey again.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

The only actual fuck was mom/dad. Disappointed.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Just 3 stars there was no incest just sister gibing him a blow job,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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