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cory2494cory2494over 3 years ago
Great Story

Short, sweet and to the point. Well written and excellent grammar (i wish it didn't mean that much to me, but it can be off-putting). Well done! Please write more.

FerrumitzalFerrumitzalover 3 years ago

Very nice. I would certainly like to see more of this story.

I get the idea that the secretary is the daughter of someone very powerful, and her becoming a secretary was something that would shock their country club crowd. Otherwise, why talk to the father about it?

There's a lot you can do when the truth is on your side!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Making fun of politicians, I see. :P

Some might say this super is what it would take to get an honest politician.

On one extreme, anyway.

I can picture a power that makes the person automatically represent the collective will of one's constituency. Like a split personality/Legion concept, but changeable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

"An Honest Politician"? Really? This story (which is quite well-written) should be posted in the Sci-fi/Fantasy genre.

MissEllie69MissEllie69about 3 years ago

Perfect description of mind control, slow burn, but when it lights it burns hot

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