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Click hereShe smiled at Brad and as she started to lower her mouth to take his penis inside, she added, "In fact, I can think of no better way of using up a tube of lip gloss."
Two faint wails of anguish filled Lena's ears for a moment, then faded as her lips closed around Brad's shaft.
- COMMENTS
ZZchromosomeabout 5 years agoHelluva good story, good character development, good plot, and a lesson learned.
Anonymousover 9 years agoJust found your story and looked for more but there are none. Sometimes inspiration doesn't come very often, but I sure enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing
Anonymousover 10 years agoGreat character development, great story, and perfect revenge - loved it!
Anonymousover 10 years agoInteresting premise with the red lipstick and gloss as the focal point...Looking at the way you write, I am going to assume you are female :) Please continue to write more such stories.
Killer_Bunnyover 10 years agoYou've done an excellent job of rewriting your bad dream and I'm sure that if you had your head examined you would only be told you have an active imagination and great skill at storytelling!
Anonymousover 10 years agowow, thanks for the wonderful tale. you hit the mark on so many levels. great developement and finish. just loved it.
lfitchover 10 years agoLoved it :) Great Halloween story. I look forward to reading more from you.
Rpierzover 10 years agoIt fits the day perfectly. If your future stories are of this caliber you've got a fan in me.
NatureSuperalover 10 years agoAuthorMy sincere thanks for the kind words, everyone. Much appreciated, and great encouragement. Hopefully another nightmare - or just a pleasant dream, if I am lucky - will inspire another story. Someone suggested further exploration of the same reality of this first story; I hadn't considered that before, but maybe expanding on the Lena-verse (?) would be fun. I'm open for suggestions ...
Anonymousover 10 years agoA true pleasure to read something written by somebody who is a writer and knows how to hang the words together.
What a breath of fresh air to a previously jaded reader.
