All Comments on 'An Illusion of Control'

That was an extremely well-written and good story, my kudos to you! From start to finish I was interested and turned on and the use of cooking terminology was genius! I hope to read more of your work if it's all of this quality!

The sex was simply too matter-of-fact, and not really erotic. (Also, the word is 'prototypical', it's not hyphenated.)