All Comments on 'An Immoral Marriage Contract'

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Nasty56Nasty563 months ago

Interesting story but ending was too short.

steppinontoessteppinontoes3 months ago

Totally different take on romance, but it shows how dumb we males can be,

Bronco56Bronco563 months ago

Great story. I enjoyed it very much. 5stars

technofrog2002technofrog20023 months ago

I loved it, very well written and a novel take on a very old concept. 5🌟

SlithyToveSlithyTove3 months ago

Very unique, and excellently done!

Wolfden999Wolfden9993 months ago

Awesome story. Original

OvercriticalOvercritical3 months ago

I'm not sure why I kept reading after the nonsensical plot was disclosed, but it was well written even if was a silly play on meaningless religious myth. I did use my best skimming skills and got through it quickly, but still ended up with a final rating of 2*. Sorry, but silly gets what silly does.

Baldy74Baldy743 months ago

A really great story. A nice twist and very original.

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood3 months ago

Some very interesting theological views. Overall, an interesting story. Well written.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Interesting story!

4

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Excellent story. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Mostly good story. But really not a fan of how the women in the story seemed to think the correct behaviour in a relationship was to walk over the men, talking down to them to “put them in their place” & the men were basically universally just shown as weak and easily manipulated.

Her mother made sense. She was the scheming manipulator, the real power behind the scenes.

But she herself actually seemed like a kind, nice person. It really put me off when she, & then his own mum, started acting like that too and basically just made me dislike the women characters, & also then the men for letting themselves be talked down to so disrespectfully like that.

sweetlilnothingssweetlilnothings2 months ago

This was cute. Interesting. kind of sad.. my favorite part was the description of Lucifer at the beginning but a good story overall

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Confusing, but cute.

AA82ndAAAA82ndAA12 days ago

Yikes. This is to ar out there for my entertainment tastes.

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I have a weakness for happy endings. When people face the worst, no matter how bad it is, I like people seeing come out better people for it. Remember what I write is fiction, it doesn't always have to make sense.

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