All Comments on 'An Innocent's Epiphany Ch. 01'

I love it please keep going! I cant wait to read more!!

I have enjoyed your story of becoming a woman! Your story is very well written and I could almost see you glowing in your new world.

I am delighted the heroine has discovered the magic of her body. Her earlier spiritual/moral guardians misdirected her but they were taking things in stages. First she had to grow and mature then discover the secrets of her own body but you are rushing her to the next level without understanding.,the next step for her is a relatiqqqonship and discovery of what hat iscabout. Physical sex is retained for her wedding bed when her husband will show her the joys her body will produce on her wedding might and beyond.