All Comments on 'An Invitation Pt. 01'

by yellowjacket66

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Tell us about the dinner.

KellyVerneKellyVernealmost 2 years ago

Totally enjoyed the story.

slavco8slavco8almost 2 years ago
Nice

Please keep going..

Bronco56Bronco56almost 2 years ago

Great beginning to hopefully a hot story. Please continue

5stars

jay1459jay1459almost 2 years ago

Love it so far -- more please>

napgamernapgameralmost 2 years ago

Nice slow build up. Great so far.

mybikecruisesmybikecruisesalmost 2 years ago

Slow start, if this is interesting to either one or as it sounds, by her voice and his blood flow to harden his cock, they should have at least had some great sex in this intro.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like the development of the story.

Pictures formed by words!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good teaser, both her with her husband and you with the story leading to . . .

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey21107 months ago

Wifey is sending mixed messages to hubby. How is he supposed to make a decision when he doesn't know how she feels. Needs some work, but the idea is provocative. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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