All Comments on 'An Invitation to View'

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
Lovely

piece of writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Story

Lets hope there is more! Love all the naughty descriptions of linger, stocking, heels and hot milf sex! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great stuff

so refreshing and different from the usual rubbish we get on here.an author who can write english shown by the little touch."off from" instead of the usual "off of"

amoroneamoroneover 10 years ago
Lovely

I love this story, well done, well written.

I bet he wouldn't have lasted that long in reality.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
MATURE IS SEXY

HOT

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Wonderful

Good writing and actually believable.

CroonyCroonyover 2 years ago
Hot

Very sensual piece of writing. Excellent.

timbrewulftimbrewulfover 2 years ago

Beautifully scripted. Pace and tyming immaculate. A pretty lady seducing a youhg man willig to learn. Maybe i the furure She may introduce him to another needy lady? Mom? Just hoping. You have a lovely touch. Thank you.

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A bit more time on my hands these days, so trying to get back into writing after a break from it. Feedback welcome but please don't be offended if I don't enter into correspondence. I like to explore the pre-foreplay stage, how the sexual tension begins (and who by), whether ...