All Comments on 'An Odd Job'

This is a good, interesting narrative and very well written. It is superior to typical stories in the fantasy genre.

... pleasure to read, thanks!

Easy to read. Good characters.

Please add to this entertaining story.

Excellent start, looking forward to the next chapter!

Awesome story, more please

I really loved these characters and their interaction. I thought the chemistry was great between them and would have enjoyed just watching the two of them flirt their way through adventure after adventure.

Very tasty. I love the flavours of magic. Definitely more please.

Wow, that was fantastic! Did you get some inspiration from the anime Fairy Tail? There was some anime-esque imagery that really made me grin. I love the crafting and pacing of this story and definitely want more!

myself completely lost at the end.

"She gasped as his entire being unraveled before her."

What does it mean that his entire being unraveled? She gasped; that implies she was shocked. Did she kill him? Absorb him?

You destroyed the entire story for me with the last two vague paragraphs.