All Comments on 'An Odd Kidnapping'

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He bought the handcuffs which she discovered were cheap, so how did she get the keys so she could hide them ?

There are only a few keys that fit handcuffs. (Think about it: LEO's have to be able to unlock the cuffs placed by another LEO.) It would be easy to purchase cuff-key sets or perhaps just keys that would fit commonly available handcuffs including those used by LEO.

Best story I've read on here in ages, keep it up.

There are essentially 3 types of Law enforcement type hand cuff keys and one type of "novelty" key. One of the law enforcement keys is designed to open all three (I carry this key) so she would only need 2 keys to cover all handcuffs.

It wasn’t Non Con, I suppose it was CNC/ Rape depending on which character you look at. It’s difficult to maintain the suspension of disbelief there were just too many things in it that didn’t make sense.

The overall concept is fine, I’ve read stories similar to this before where the entire scene has been orchestrated by the “victim”. There are much safer ways to achieve the same results.

Issues :

if her parents were that wealthy she would already have a minder/ bodyguard as she would be a target for genuine kidnapping attempts.

Sex shop/ novelty handcuffs are generally flimsy; the ones I’ve seen had a safety catch that when pressed they unlock the cuffs. How many different types of cuffs are available to the public?

what guarantees did she have that he was free from STDs, and just how stupid is this criminal that he would leave DNA evidence behind?

I didn’t understand why she specifically chose an old man? Unless that was meant to be a matter of perspective?

Whilst these inconsistencies are definitely odd there was another glaring comment in her internal monologue that I found bizarre and if I’m being honest it was pretty offensive...

“... making me again feel like some sort of BDSM whore that needs to be punished...”

Really?? She’s sexually aware and grown up enough to plan her own “rape” but at the same time is completely clueless about sex between consenting adults. All of the inconsistencies just kept piling up to the point that the outcome seems ridiculously unlikely.

Tess (UK)

Well that was fun! Thanks for a good read. I would think that the initial clamped boobs to the floor of the van would have gotten more attention from her.

So hot, your stories are the best.

AMAZING!! I love the twist at the end. This story got me rock hard and I almost came while jerking off. Fantastic and now I'm horny as hell!!!!

great twist at the end. clever and brutal in a sexy way throughout.