by aspiringromantic
Well.. good to see you back.. You are one of my fav writers on the site and i have been following your work for a long time.. I hated u for "The Best Friends" and "The neighbours" and absolulety loved the "The Office Party" (it is among my top 5 romance stories...)
It is a lot similar to the Office Party, but i loved it nonetheless.. Only complaint is that you should have spent a little more time focussing on Heather..
Hoping that you wont disappear for anothetr 5 years before delighting us with another one of your beautiful tales..
~Gary Andrews
(garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)
Good character development, a carefully crafted introduction, and an engaging plot all go into what is an excellent romance drama. The love scenes are well written, albeit much too brief, and they are carefully woven into the plot rather than being just extras to it. Five stars