All Comments on 'An Open Entanglement Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Loving this so far. The characters are believable and interesting. Intrigued to find out where it goes!

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
Ch. 1 was Great....

But by the end of the 1st page in Ch. 2 I fell asleep it was that boring, so I stopped. Didn't help that Taylor is a smoker, too.. Many writers on here fall short after the 1st chapter. Sad......

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Thought the story was great keep it up

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