All Comments on 'An Ordinary Man's Life Ch. 33'

This has turned into a giant run on sentence. Nobody cares. Stop posting.

and to offset the asshole annony!!

I won't stop writing and publishing it at Literotica because of some crude, half-assed anonymous comments. I'm much too old to care for stupid comments. Furthermore, I've too much fun writing and sharing it with you. I know I make mistakes but I can't just find a reliable editor around the corner. Let me emphasize nobody is forced to read my story. Just stop if you don't like it. However, from the voting and the many 'Hots' my story has received I believe there are a lot of you out there who like my story about my not so ordinary hero, Todd. Thank you all for your support.

get over your nitpicking self, this story is ENTERTAINTMENT, and as such it is to be enjoyed, and since you complain enough allow me to speculate that you secretly like it too much otherwise you would have stopped reading it in chapter 2 and not in chapter 33.. hahahaha.. I pity you and I can see the love/hate relationship you have for the story, there was an old saying long ago, that misery loves company, and another one that say "those that can DO, and those that CAN'T love to bring down the ones that can".. you have shown yourself what type of a fan you are.

Unedited is still better than edited In my opinion. Even though I liked your last editor it seemed like they were a one and done.