by Stopokochac
You're definitely right that your story had some things in common with mine. I like this one. It's vivid and interesting. Kinda feel sorry for the main character, but his thoughts and anxieties make him feel real; you did well on that. Actually have things in common with you too on having Polish descent and being into girl's feet also... The latter I don't admit to just anyone, though I'm sure it'll be a partial thing in some of my writing to come. I liked your inclusion of that, it kinda takes some courage.