All Comments on 'An Unconventional Outfit'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Leaves way to much for the reader to have to supply the situation and circumstances. While it gets it's point across it does so in a vacuum.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Decadent

Loved it

bkr12kbkr12kover 3 years ago
Fun flash

Sorry about the innuendo but I couldn't help myself. Great piece of flash. I loved it!

OffNSFWOffNSFWabout 3 years ago

Love this kind of writing. Detail-oriented about the experience and the senses, but providing just enough of the scene for the reader's imagination to fill in the rest. Very sexy. Thank you.

GinloverGinloverabout 3 years ago

A great capturing of a moment in time.

TransguycharlieTransguycharlie10 months ago

I wish I saw women like this at Comic-Con’s I’ve been too. I want to rub my tdick against her clit til we both came. I’m wanking hard and fast thinking about it

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Hey. I am an author from the UK who tries to write multifaceted characters in interesting, and sexy, scenarios. Please comment if you like things so I know how I'm doing. 22/07 Update - Hi all. Been a while. I'm doing well but writing has been a struggle recently. Lots of W...