All Comments on 'An Undeniable Passion Ch. 23'

What a great series! I have enjoyed all of your stories. Can't wait for the next one.

I love your story, but please don't delay the inevitable happy marriage too much longer. Something's gotta give!

Leave them together. I love this story but don't leave us hangin for so long! Love it all!!!!!

would have to agree with your other readers these two belong together but we need some action..how about a dual...thomas and drake over the honor of thomas attempting to rape/or rape V? drake winning of course but still a bit bloody...V preggers? ok ok whatever you write will be awesome i adore this story. Hope you put more in print soon. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay

Excellent chapter! They belong together!

can't wait to read the rest. You do an excellent job of really building the tension before release.

You can't just leave it there! More! More! More!