All Comments on 'An Unexpected Adventure'

great story! nice to read something from the woman's perspective....seems more believable

more likely a pig view not to many women think this way just the pigs of the sex..

no way you give another man what you wont give your husband.

you dont share your wife with anyone.

Dump and get a real woman.

You can give the rest a lesson -- amazing visions and without the lurid exaggerations which is just about all I ever get on this site. You are up there with Quinn Rogan and just a few others.

Well written with good characters, and very erotic descriptions.

I did NOT conclude that Neighbor Hubby's invitation to observe them from inside their house meant that she was going to be a participant! It is also IMPOSSIBLE to assume that Inveterate porn-watching Hubby would NOT be outside watching the live action, especially if it was likely that Sweetie was going to be on the menu!

Other than a few details (such as NOT taking her ass after getting good and lubed in the doggy posture) I enjoyed it quite a lot (five stars worth)! I also thought Hubby's one-off restriction was not in-character, nor in his best sharing-future!

What a great read, fast sensual and believable.I'm just going to see if you have more like this.

But this one was pretty damn good. It wasn't about cheating, it wasn't about disrespecting the husband, it was about exploring her sexuality.

Looking forward to more.

As is norm for this "writer" . "5*" !

First time I have read your work but I am a fan. Thanks for sharing!

Good story. As a previous comment noted, I would have thought that the invitation to come inside and 'watch' was just that. I just thought that I missed something in my haste to get to the 'good parts'.

But it is a great story, great fun to read. The wife took a heck of good way to spice up the marriage. I would have assumed that watching porn and ignoring your wife was very disrespectful, and the wife done good to bring hubby back into their marriage. And bringing Fiona into their house in exchange would be a great way to even things out, and a great additional chapter, in my mind if the author doesn't do it.

What I liked the most was that she didn't disrespect her husband. I suspect that he will be a lot less interested in Christy Canyon after that night. Really nicely done.

Put a dvd in the VCR, I bet it didn't work lol