All Comments on 'An Unexpected Gift'

Great story. 👏 5/5

Everyone has a station in this life ... teacher - janitor etc. But as they say: "love has no boundary it just IS".

Nice job. A little fast but it had been building for a while and what the heck, it was almost Christmas! 5*.

Nice.

Beautifully written, this tear-jerker is romance story-telling at its finest. Its only flaw is its brevity. Accordingly, one more more follow-up chapters is certainly warranted and needed. Five stars.

Maybe when he put his love pee in her, her belly will get big and the result will call her mommy...

Wonderful story, 10 stars. Please write another part, Rosa, in a few years will be teaching THEIR children, mommy's babies...