by iraussieguy
Very well written and looking forward to the continuing events.
Looks like it has been quite a while since you submitted anything...welcome back
That was a very good story and I can't wait to read what happens next. :)
Was a very believable story that you don't see on here to much, wish we did and all in all we have some very talented writers on here and you are one of them.! Thanks and can't wait for more from you. JAG/TSO
I've missed your writing. Please tell us more about this couple.
This is an excellent story. A follow-up story about their upcoming week together would be great!!
Just love Your stories, please continue this one. Not many Aussie writers out there and i really love Your perfect use of the "Aussie" language.
I enjoyed your story very much. I really enjoyed the slow buildup to what turned out to be a very hot sexual encounter. And, there was more going on between the two than just the sex and I enjoyed that as well. I haven't even checked yet to see if you have more stories, but I certainly hope there are! Thanks again, [Gualterio]
Lucky bugger! He's right, she seems to be getting a lot of benefits as well. Maybe all the sex will help his back more than he thinks (It does mine :D).
Great story line, love the characters with the interactions and your smooth "picture" is very enjoyable that could lead for many chapters.
Please continue!! A man's writing that seems more like a woman's perspective or just a romantic, erotic mind into text, too good not to continue.
We read it twice, and the sentiments, and loving were so well written. Thank you for such a fine sharing.
I started reading this story and got sleepy and went to bed. But first thing
morning I started reading again . I thought the flow was very good. If I were
editing it, I would not change a thing. Jo was self confident and open to being with a man who is on sticks.
I hope to read more of your stories. Thank you, Ken
Wonderfully erotic story, with plenty of 'space' to take it further - tahnks for writing it!
What a great well written story. Being a little older than "Alex" all I could do is dream about the possibilities in my future. Thank you for allowing me into your story as a observer.