All Comments on 'An Unexpected Turn Ch. 01'

Yeah, so I have got to know what happens next.

I liked the his realistic reactions to the situation. They were perfect. Not too ridiculously cocky or too naive, like you see happening often on this site. Good job.

You hooked me

Great beginning!

Oh god. Did his wife and her hubby have an affair, she told her hubby that she was telling him? That's when her hubby said he knew? She 'evened' it up by doing him, and she thought he knew. Then realized he was clueless.

Good premise. Even if that isn't what happened. Just noticed that there's another in the series. Doh!