All Comments on 'An Unfamiliar Melody Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
English teacher?

Puh-leeze!!! English teacher? In a university? That doesn't know the difference between a role and a roll? That can't punctuate? And a fantasy that has been done/overdone so many times? Try trailer-park next time.

brian358brian358over 14 years ago
Loved It!

Great story!

Sweet, innocent, fun, sexy and in a great setting that can't be used too many times. Very much looking forward to part two.

Don't be put off by the negative elements at Literotica. It's a great first story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
lame

there is no way in hell that girl would have gotten into college with that level of stupidity. be more realistic next time.

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