All Comments on 'An Unforgettable First'

But needs much more foreplay before fucking begins. And you need an editor: you meant WAIST, not WASTE.

Honey, reading your "unforgettable first" story brought back many memories of first times with several girl friends. Also how much fun it was to make love in a vehicle. I loved this story, but do wish it had been your first post before the one of your brother and his friend fucking you.

Keep writing and I'm adding you as a favorite!

a hot cherry bustin story u have written sweetie--lots of great memories it brings back--the pickup part is great -- works really good with the tail gate down and the girl on a saddle blanket yeah been there n done that--i like it when the size of his cock is in the story and all the juice drippin--keep up the good writing

Very nice for one of your first stories. Needs a little minor proofing and some more details to make it a bit longer. But great start. I have several pieces I've written but haven't posted any yet. Keep up the great work.