All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Kiss (Revised)'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Yeah I still can't get behind the foam it's fine otherwise

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This was fun to read. Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Well that was fun. Are there chapters or sequels to this story?

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Lesbians. Hot.

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

I don't understand. Is this from a tv show? Who are these people?

-Terry

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

I don't like the form but I like the story. Thanks for making it.

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

Great read! So fun!

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

I ship these two. Love them!

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Many of my stories will revolve around beings known as Slavers (Humans with supernatural powers, they feed on all kinds of energy in order to become more powerful and extend their lifeforce, often by any means, including draining the lifeforce of other living beings. Feeding o...