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All Comments on 'An Unlikely Alliance'

by AmaranthGinavisi

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HaruhiSuzumiaHaruhiSuzumiaover 4 years ago
Pretty good

This was pretty good. I liked it!

The light femdom elements were perfect.

AmaranthGinavisiAmaranthGinavisiover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks for your feedback. Glad you liked it.

rjm2rjm2over 4 years ago
I liked it

I would like you see a continuation. I give it 4.5 *.

AmaranthGinavisiAmaranthGinavisiover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

You never know.

lorrisuelorrisueover 4 years ago
Intriguing

I liked it. Would like another chapter, if possible. Welcome to Lit!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More!

Please upload more of this! I'd read this as an actual novel, you're such a good writer!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Extremely well done and creative. Please keep writing!

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Good story. I like it a lot. Next chapter please. AAAA+++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very enjoyable story. I implore you to continue this, while similar to other stories it is very unique in how it is written, especially characterization.

Looking forward to chapter 2 very much!

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