All Comments on 'An Unspoken Message'
by 012Say
- 112 Comments (Page 2)
Gardenshed7 months agoWell written, not what I would have done, but it’s your story. Thanks for sharing.
nixrox7 months ago3 stars - This relationship is over - dragging it along any further is a waste of time - the TRUST is zero.
This is certainly a different tactic just to raise awareness of the potential affair. However, direct face to face communication could have done the same thing, especially with his business partner, as a secondary witness to a potential affair. She would have been looking into the eyes of both men, as she tries to explain why she was leaving the hotel parking lot at that time of day. The results would have been obtained a lot faster - without involving anyone else. Although, I think I would have also had the lawyer call the ASSHOLE anyway - killing two birds with one stone.
demander7 months agoClever. But I believe he screwed up. She'll only be more careful next time. And she still works with Jay. It'll eat at him and ruin the marriage. D
Anonymous7 months agoThe idea was good,but not following up made it meaningless..Matters not what he himself did or did not do in the past,without a follow up its not a deterent from future affairs..3 stars..JZK
Anonymous7 months agoCome on!what kind of nonsense are you writing.What do you consider a lie? She made an out right lie to husbands face with her reply that she is faithful and always will be and you have the husband say its not an outright lie????,you as the author,how do you figure getting away with that one...you ruined that skit. Only 2 stars because of that..
Anonymousabout 20 hours agoWhat made this story fail is that the husband was a 2 time cheater himself. That makes having ANY sympathy for him hard to generate, while at tne same time the wife cheats and, as far as readers know, without knowing about hubby’s cheating.
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That makes it impossible to relate to either of them….and thus the reader doesn’t care.
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