All Comments on 'An Upper-Cut to the Jaw'

Pregnant women should not drink. Ever hear of Fetal Alcohol Syndrome.

Other than that not the greatest I have read on literotica but not worst. A solid 4

An ordinary that sucked.

OK but the ending was very weak. Wifey was told there might be a way back to her daughter and sons if she straightened herself out and became the woman her adult children needed her to be. I don't think that getting married three more times in about a 6 or 7 year period would do anything other than guarantee her children would have little or nothing to do with her. It strikes me that portraying her as a completely unrepentant slut is the lazy way out. There is a formula in too many stories that the husband ends up finding the love of his life after being cheated on and the cheating wife turns into a promiscuous over the top slut.

At least occasionally, it might be interesting to show the wife making an effort to straighten out and get back into her childrens' lives rather than just writing her off as grandma slut. That said, it is still a solid 4**** for good writing.

Good one. Enjoyed the initial ambush muchly as I did the succinct ending. It was all that need be said.

Grandma slut haha the shoe fits. Great story 5-stars.

Thanks for a well-written, thoroughly enjoyable read!. Well done!!

Fluidswallower had it over all the hard-of-understanding critics. Most excellent five star tale.

A 5, until the last two paragraphs!

"If I had learned that any of our children weren't mine, you'd be in the trunk of my car right now and I'd be driving to Vermont to bury your corpse in the middle of the woods."

That’s what he should’ve done regardless!

ZK

Just the usual cheating bitch tale with nothing really different in it apart from a Nurse by education whatever that is.

Started out ok but then dissolved into a mess. Not up to SG's normal standard.

Great story. The ending got a little confusing because you never told us why she went through so many husbands. Also, why was Micky sobbing when she was on the phone talking about her sister?

Other than those minor things, great job!

It was an ok story but I like a little more sneaking around, discovery and retribution, but that's just me and I'm dead set against no-fault divorce.

An usual cheating tale, nothing out of the ordinary, nothing spectacular. And it's a bit confusing why, after all the months of fucking, Mickie suddenly realises that Chris wasn't right for her. No reason given.

Nothing special in this story. Also just another bitch daughter not believing her mother is a cheating skank but it was her money being wasted

Another good read, but I agree that the last paragraphs left for something. I don't see a reason to introduce concepts in an epilogue and not even give them more than a sentence. I guess we're meant to understand that Jillian is irredeemable and plows through husbands. But that wasn't how her character was developed. She was a fatally flawed but otherwise loving wife and good mom who cheated like clockwork every three months. And the dynamic with Mickie was introduced and just as quickly he was with her sister. So the ending felt unresolved as per the rest of the story to me. Also, you really didnt need the line about filling the whole house with unflushed shit, especially since it didnt come into the story otherwise. Cheapens your writing.

Five stars easily

Cheaters shouldn’t get together in NC, we still have the, rarely used but still effective, alienation of affection law. Great story SG.