All Comments on 'An Very Embarrassing Evening'

by malcolmsu

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yowseryowserover 1 year ago

Unique

Life is stranger than fiction, so often. An amusing story, with a little work it could become a superb one. Not sure if you could tease out the transition from 'slightly' to 'way too tight' any more, but that would make an interesting pivot point. Once the 'one glass too many' turns into two or three, all manner of possibilities exist. Keener observations of her sex would be sweet.

'success! I started to go limp.' Not sure one sees this sentence very often!

Lovely tale.

malcolmsumalcolmsuover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks @yowser, I'll see what I can do to tease it out a bit although with my limited lifetime experiences of vaginas, 'keener observations of her sex' might be beyond me! :-) Malcy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It's too unerotic to be made up!!!

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